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Victorian VPS selection criteria examples (VPS2 to VPS6).
Victorian government applications use the VPS Capability Framework and the language of 'key selection criteria.' The six worked examples below span the key capability clusters across the VPS2–VPS6 range, calibrated to the framework's terminology and weighting.
What Victorian Public Service applications actually involve.
The Victorian Public Service uses the VPS Capability Framework, maintained by the Victorian Public Sector Commission (VPSC). Where federal applications reference the ILS and NSW applications reference the PSCF, Victorian applications reference the VPS Capability Framework — with similar structural intent but different terminology and groupings.
Victorian government also uses distinctive language: "key selection criteria" (KSC) rather than the federal "selection criteria." Functionally the two are similar, but Victorian role descriptions phrase requirements explicitly as key selection criteria, and applications are routinely scored against these directly. Reading the role description carefully to identify each KSC is the foundation of a strong Victorian application.
The VPS Capability Framework groups capabilities into clusters covering things like Personal Qualities, Working Relationships, Self-Management, Service Delivery, Strategic Thinking, and Leadership. Each capability has multiple proficiency levels keyed to the VPS grades. As with the NSW framework, the proficiency level required for each capability is set independently of the overall grade — a VPS5 role might require Adept-level Communication and Intermediate-level Project Management.
Victorian applications also commonly distinguish between application formats more explicitly than other jurisdictions. Some roles ask for a "separate document" response addressing each KSC under its own heading. Others ask for the KSCs addressed within a cover letter. Others ask for short responses to specific application questions. The format matters — submitting the wrong format gets your application screened out before content is assessed.
Victorian applications demonstrate capability against KSCs that are typically more explicit and operationally framed than federal selection criteria. "I have strong stakeholder management skills" is too vague. "I have managed relationships with department executives, external delivery partners, and ministerial advisers, including through three procurement processes where stakeholder priorities did not align" matches the operational specificity Victorian panels look for.
The VPS framework also weights "self-management" and "personal qualities" more visibly than other state frameworks. Resilience, integrity, accountability, and self-awareness regularly appear as explicit KSCs or capability requirements. Address them directly when they appear — don't assume they will emerge from other examples.
The classification levels at a glance.
VPS2
Entry · FoundationalEntry-level administrative, clerical, or technical work under close supervision. Equivalent in scope to APS3. KSCs typically focus on accuracy, communication, working in a team, and following established procedures. Cover letter plus resume is the typical format.
VPS3
Operational · IntermediateOperational work with growing autonomy. Project Officer, Policy Officer, Senior Administrative Officer roles. Equivalent in scope to APS4–5. KSC responses typically 200–300 words each, often addressed in cover letter or short separate document.
VPS4
Senior operational · AdeptSenior operational work with substantial independence. Senior Project Officer, Senior Policy Officer roles. Equivalent in scope to APS5–6. KSC responses 250–400 words each, typically in separate document format.
VPS5
Management entry · Adept to AdvancedFirst-line management entry point. Manager, Senior Adviser, Principal Policy Officer roles. Equivalent in scope to APS6–EL1. People management capabilities apply. Substantive application required — four to six pages.
VPS6
Senior management · AdvancedSenior management roles. Director, Senior Manager, Principal Manager. Equivalent in scope to EL1–EL2. People management at Advanced level. Application often includes a leadership statement in addition to KSC responses.
Six worked Victorian VPS examples.
The examples below span the key VPS capability clusters — Personal Qualities, Working Relationships, Service Delivery, Strategic Thinking, and Leadership. Each is calibrated to a typical VPS3–VPS6 scope. Target length is 250–400 words per response.
Demonstrating integrity and professional ethics
Demonstrated commitment to integrity, professional ethics, and accountability, including in situations involving competing pressures or interests.
I demonstrate integrity in my professional conduct, including in situations involving competing pressures (restate the criterion). In my current role as a Senior Policy Officer (VPS4) with a Victorian government department, I led the policy advice on a contested ministerial decision (situation). The decision involved a proposal that had political support from the Minister's office but which the available evidence did not adequately support (task).
I prepared advice that set out the evidence base honestly, including the gaps. I did not understate the political dimensions of the issue, but I also did not let them shape the analytical content of the advice. Where the evidence was equivocal, I said so explicitly rather than presenting one interpretation as more settled than it was. I included an explicit recommendation that the Minister consider commissioning further analysis before committing to the proposal, while also including options for proceeding if the Minister judged that timing required a decision before further work could be done. I briefed my Director on the substance of the advice before it was finalised, including specifically flagging that the advice was not aligned with what the Minister's office had been informally signalling. The Director made a small revision to the framing but did not change the substantive conclusions (actions).
The Minister commissioned the additional analysis, which subsequently revealed two material risks not visible in the original proposal. The eventual policy decision diverged from the initial direction and was substantially better-grounded. My Director referenced the handling of the matter in my annual review as the kind of advice she expected from her senior officers (result).
Managing complex stakeholder relationships
Demonstrated ability to build and maintain effective working relationships with internal and external stakeholders, including in situations involving competing interests.
I build and maintain effective working relationships with diverse stakeholders, including in situations where their interests do not fully align (restate the criterion). In my current role I am the primary departmental contact for three peak industry bodies, two unions, and the relevant Commonwealth counterpart on a federally co-funded regulatory program (situation). During the last program cycle, the peak bodies and the unions raised divergent concerns about a proposed reform to compliance requirements (task).
I met each stakeholder group separately rather than calling a single consultation forum. Separate meetings let each group raise concerns candidly without performing for the other groups. From those conversations I identified that the underlying disagreement was narrower than the public positions suggested — both sides were concerned about implementation burden, but for different specific reasons. I drafted a discussion paper that named both sets of concerns explicitly and proposed a phased implementation approach that addressed the most significant burden on each side. I circulated the paper to all stakeholders simultaneously, with a covering note explaining what each had told me and how the proposal responded. I held a single joint consultation forum two weeks later, with the paper as the starting point for discussion rather than open-ended consultation that would have re-litigated the public positions (actions).
The reform proceeded with substantive support from both peak bodies and one of the two unions. The remaining union maintained its formal opposition but did not actively campaign against the reform. The Department's senior executive sponsor referenced the handling of the consultation in the program's quarterly governance report (result).
Delivering quality outcomes against agreed timeframes
Demonstrated ability to deliver quality outcomes against agreed deadlines, including in situations of competing priorities and resource constraint.
I deliver quality outcomes against agreed deadlines, including coordinating inputs across multiple contributors under genuine resource constraint (restate the criterion). In my current role I lead the Department's annual portfolio statement preparation — a coordinated submission drawing on inputs from eight program areas, finance, ministerial liaison, and the secretary's office (situation). The submission has a hard deadline driven by Treasury's annual cycle, and the previous year's submission required three rounds of executive revision before finalisation (task).
I mapped every contributing input against the deadline working backwards, identifying which contributors needed to deliver what, when, and with what dependencies. I held a single 45-minute kick-off meeting with all contributing leads in week one to lock the timeline and clarify expectations before drafting began. I built in a two-week consolidation window between contributors' final inputs and executive review — previous years had compressed this and produced the review-rework cycle. I introduced a structured review against a quality checklist before sending sections to executives, which caught issues that would otherwise have appeared in executive review. When two contributors were tracking late at the three-week mark I escalated to my Director with specific remediation options rather than just flagging the issue. I treated each executive comment as a learning input for the next cycle, not just a comment to address (actions).
The submission was delivered two days ahead of deadline. Executive review required a single round of revision rather than three. The approach was documented as the model for subsequent cycles. The Department's secretary referenced the quality of the submission in the year-end senior executive review (result).
Identifying and implementing improvements to existing processes
Demonstrated ability to identify opportunities for improvement and implement changes that produce better outcomes for clients or stakeholders.
I identify opportunities to improve how routine work is delivered and implement changes that produce better outcomes (restate the criterion). In my current role our team handles a regular client consultation process that consistently took twice as long as the budget allowed for — consuming team capacity that was needed for other work (situation). The overrun had become normalised across three consecutive cycles (task).
I worked through the process step by step rather than relying on the documented procedure, which turned out not to match what the team actually did. The largest time sink was a manual reconciliation step that had been added two years earlier to address a specific data quality issue — an issue that had been resolved at the source 12 months later but the reconciliation step had stayed. I designed a revised process that removed the unnecessary reconciliation and added a single validation check at the relevant downstream point. I tested it against the previous cycle's data to confirm the validation caught everything the reconciliation had been catching. I documented the revised process clearly enough that anyone in the team could run it, not just the person who had been doing it. I rolled it out with a short briefing for the team explaining what had changed and why, and scheduled a six-month check-in to confirm the change had not introduced new problems (actions).
The following consultation cycle consumed half the previous time, returning the team to budget. The check-in six months later confirmed no downstream issues. Two adjacent teams have adopted the same approach for their equivalent processes (result).
Applying strategic perspective to operational work
Demonstrated ability to apply strategic perspective and judgement to operational decisions, including consideration of longer-term implications.
I apply strategic perspective to operational decisions, including the longer-term implications of choices that might otherwise be treated as routine (restate the criterion). In my previous role I led the redevelopment of the Department's grants administration platform (situation). The immediate operational requirement was a system that handled the current grants program more efficiently (task).
I considered the system requirements in two horizons rather than one. For the immediate horizon, I identified the operational needs of the current program and the workflow improvements that would deliver efficiency gains. For the longer horizon, I looked at the Department's emerging policy directions and the likely shape of future grants programs over a three- to five-year window — including programs that hadn't been announced but were predictable from public direction. The two horizons pointed to different system design choices in three specific areas. I prepared a paper for the project sponsor that set out the operational design that would meet immediate needs, the strategic design that would also accommodate the likely future state, and the additional cost of the strategic option — about 12% of the project budget. I made the case in terms the sponsor would care about: avoided rebuild cost, deployment timeframes for future programs, and the political optics of building a system that would need replacing within three years (actions).
The strategic design was adopted. Two new grants programs announced in the subsequent 18 months were deployed on the new platform within their original timeframes — against industry benchmarks that suggested at least one would need a system rebuild. The project sponsor cited the strategic framing as one of the reasons for adoption when presenting the project at the Department's annual governance review (result).
Leading and developing people
Demonstrated ability to lead and develop staff, build team capability, and manage performance constructively.
I lead and develop staff with a focus on building capability for the next level of work and addressing performance issues directly when they arise (restate the criterion). In my current VPS5 role I manage six direct reports across VPS3 and VPS4 levels (situation). When I took on the role the team had high engagement scores but limited evidence of staff progressing to higher classifications, which the executive team had flagged as a capability development concern (task).
I established individual development plans for each direct report in the first two months, mapped to the VPS capability framework at the level above their current classification. For each, I identified one stretch piece of work and one development goal aligned to their progression interests. I held fortnightly one-on-ones structured around their work rather than mine. I made a point of identifying acting opportunities at higher classifications for team members ready for them — even where it meant losing capacity from my team temporarily. I addressed one underperforming direct report through a structured performance discussion within six weeks of identifying the gap, with a clear written summary and a four-week check-in — rather than letting it accumulate to annual review. I built a quarterly team development discussion into our team rhythm, where each person presented learning from a recent stretch piece of work to the rest of the team, which built capability across the group rather than just in the individual (actions).
Three direct reports were promoted to higher classifications across the development cycle. The underperforming team member responded constructively to the formal process and is now meeting role expectations. Annual engagement scores remained the highest in the branch and the team is now cited internally as a model for capability development (result).
Common pitfalls.
Using federal APS language in a Victorian application
Candidates with federal experience often default to ILS framing. The VPS Capability Framework uses different cluster names, different proficiency-level descriptions, and different language. Read the role description carefully and translate your evidence into VPS framework language.
Treating 'key selection criteria' as informal selection criteria
Victorian KSCs are scored explicitly. Each KSC needs a substantive response, not a passing reference. Many candidates address two or three KSCs strongly and skim others — that pattern routinely costs the role.
Submitting the wrong format
Victorian role descriptions specify the format explicitly — cover letter addressing KSCs, separate KSC document, or targeted application questions. Submitting a separate KSC document when the role asks for a cover letter (or vice versa) is grounds for screening out.
Length problems on KSC responses
Most VPS roles specify a length per KSC response. Submitting 600 words when 300 is requested signals inability to write to length. Submitting 150 words when 300 is requested signals underpreparation. Either reads poorly.
Skipping personal qualities and self-management
The VPS framework weights personal qualities (resilience, integrity, accountability, self-management) more explicitly than other frameworks. Pitches that focus only on technical and stakeholder capabilities miss a dimension panels are looking for.
Generic strategic thinking claims
Strategic thinking is the capability most often claimed vaguely. The framework expects specific evidence of strategic judgement applied to operational work, including the longer-term implications of decisions. If your example reads as tactical delivery with a forward-looking sentence appended, it isn't yet a strategic thinking example.
Application formats in the Victorian Public Service.
Victorian applications use several formats depending on the role.
Cover letter addressing key selection criteria. Common at VPS2–VPS4. A one- to two-page letter that addresses each KSC in turn, with a brief example for each.
Separate KSC document. Common at VPS4–VPS6. Each KSC under its own heading with a 250–400 word response. Cover letter accompanies but is shorter and less detailed than the KSC document.
Targeted application questions. Specific questions in the application system, each capped at 250–500 words. Increasingly common across all VPS grades.
Leadership statement. Often required at VPS6, in addition to KSC responses. A separate piece of writing that addresses leadership approach, values, and approach to people management. Typically one to two pages.
Victorian local government uses a different framework — the LG Pro Capability Framework for local government professionals — though many Victorian councils have adopted the VPS framework directly. Victorian Public Health roles (Department of Health agencies, hospital networks) use their own role descriptions with KSCs but generally align with the VPS framework principles.
For more on the VPS Capability Framework, the VPSC's capability framework page is the authoritative reference.
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